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Also, the existing essay uses personal anecdotes, like SZA's Instagram messages. Maybe I can add more details about her public statements or interviews where she discusses the album. That would add authenticity. For example, if she's talked about how writing SOS was a therapeutic process for her.
Finally, proofread for coherence and grammar. Make sure each paragraph has a clear topic sentence and supports the main thesis of the essay. sza sosrar updated
I should also make sure the tone is academic but accessible, avoiding overly complex language but maintaining a professional tone. Need to check for any gaps in the existing essay and fill them. For example, in the genre-blending section, the existing essay mentions jazz and soul. Maybe specify which producers or collaborators contributed to that, like working with Phoelix or other known producers. Also, the existing essay uses personal anecdotes, like